Amazing but disappointing guys !
The way you play the dialogs don’t match with the gesture. You don’t take your time to say your text and intonation is often inappropriate. For example, the scene in the cellar when the prisoner comes back home with the prison screw isn’t realistic. The fight looks like two kids arguing in a schoolyard, instead of a two gangsters bout. Intentions are good but the result is not what we should expect from you guys.
The storyboard needs more thrilling situations according to the scenario witch requires it obviously. Think to use a scary music right just before an action, or a threatening person. You did some great jobs before and I’m sure you can do something much better than this.
When you play comedies you seem to be more “comfortable”. This kind of movie is what you do the better.
You must improve in the thrillers because you have the talent to do so.
But for the moment your grade is 5/10. But please, go ahead guys !
Y’a des boulettes niveau son, mais bon… ne m’en veillez pas…
vous avez bien travaillé les gars!
Bravo.
M
Amazing but disappointing guys !
The way you play the dialogs don’t match with the gesture. You don’t take your time to say your text and intonation is often inappropriate. For example, the scene in the cellar when the prisoner comes back home with the prison screw isn’t realistic. The fight looks like two kids arguing in a schoolyard, instead of a two gangsters bout. Intentions are good but the result is not what we should expect from you guys.
The storyboard needs more thrilling situations according to the scenario witch requires it obviously. Think to use a scary music right just before an action, or a threatening person. You did some great jobs before and I’m sure you can do something much better than this.
When you play comedies you seem to be more “comfortable”. This kind of movie is what you do the better.
You must improve in the thrillers because you have the talent to do so.
But for the moment your grade is 5/10. But please, go ahead guys !